The clouds are like snails emerging to move around the world but the snails have no breath left and nor do the clouds and with one breath taking move they disappear and swap with the stars…
By Finley Moye, Year 4 Haydn Primary School
By Finley Moye, Year 4 Haydn Primary School
What a lovely simile!
ReplyDeleteWow, that sums the clouds up so simply - but so wonderfully!
ReplyDeleteI likeed the poem eshple the clouds bit.
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