Monday, 14 March 2011

The clouds


The clouds are like snails emerging to move around the world but the snails have no breath left and nor do the clouds and with one breath taking move they disappear and swap with the stars…

By Finley Moye, Year 4 Haydn Primary School

3 comments:

  1. Wow, that sums the clouds up so simply - but so wonderfully!

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  2. I likeed the poem eshple the clouds bit.

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