Wednesday 9 March 2011


Winter
Bells ringing 
Snow falling
Sledges skidding
Christmas star glowing
Icicles   falling
Snowflakes glittering
Santa sledging
Wishes coming true
Angels flying
Fireworks setting off
Decorations glowing
Trees lighting up
Rain pouring
Music playing
Roads frozen
By Mitchell and Coleby, Year 2

Snow is falling I can hear polar bears digging holes to hide their food.
Snow is falling I can hear people trudging quickly in the deep cold snow.
Snow is falling I can smell the wet dampness of the shiny ice.
Snow is falling I can smell people cooking their delicious winter casseroles.
Snow is falling I can see trees covered in silver snow.
Snow is falling I can see icicles’ hanging from the roof tops.
Snow is falling I can feel snowflakes float on to my pink gloves.
Snow is falling I can feel the coldness on my white hands.

by Olivia
It was so cold that icicles where hanging off the roof tops and growing bigger and bigger every minute.
It was so cold that all the trees and plants outside where frozen.
It was so cold my door had frozen up and I couldn’t get it open.
It was so cold that all my food and drinks turned into ice.
It was so cold that all of the windows where frozen.

by Joshua

 

9 comments:

  1. I think they are very good and very imaginative!

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  2. We think that these poems are very discriptive in the way they are written and how they don't rhyme :)

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  3. I really enjoyed reading these winter poems. It made me feel cold again

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  4. These poem's were obviously-smack in the face AMAZING! We can all agree that the children have worked really hard on this, well done!

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  5. I think that these poems are amazing and very imaginative.I really enjoyed them.

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  6. Amazingly good and cool. We like how you have set it out, we also think they are extremely amazing, good job !!!!!!!

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  7. I really like these poems as they build a very clear image in my head (I like the frozen casseroles!).
    :D :D :D :) :)

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  8. We are very proud of the children who wrote these from our school,well done! I'm sure they will appreciate these comments:)

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  9. the first poem was full of detail, the second poem had great structure and talked about the senses. The last poem was very funny, we enjoyed all three of them. :D

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