Go and open the door,
Maybe there’s a cave or a cavern or a lake of tears,
Swiftly and silently the crystal weaves its last song.
Go and open the door,
Maybe there has been bloodshed or a battle, or a battle to end all battles,
Maybe there’s a distant voice calling to heaven.
Go and open the door,
If there is a button, press it,
If it is empty as a broken soul,
If it is as old as Gandalf, Never fear,
At least we have the silence.
By Jack Nunez, Year 5 Haydn Primary School
Maybe there’s a cave or a cavern or a lake of tears,
Swiftly and silently the crystal weaves its last song.
Go and open the door,
Maybe there has been bloodshed or a battle, or a battle to end all battles,
Maybe there’s a distant voice calling to heaven.
Go and open the door,
If there is a button, press it,
If it is empty as a broken soul,
If it is as old as Gandalf, Never fear,
At least we have the silence.
By Jack Nunez, Year 5 Haydn Primary School
We like the whole idea of opening the door and the phrases and vocabulary are extremely thrilling and sensational,good job!! :D
ReplyDeleteWow! There is real talent in our EIP!
ReplyDeletethe vocabulary is so good
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