Monday, 23 May 2011

Freadom!!!

Jim stood still,

Hardly breathing,

Tips of boots shuferling.

Alone!

Stood frozen,

Middle of the gate.

Heart pounding.

Took chance carefully,

Slinked like a cat.

So close now,

Trying to prepare himself.

Finally FREE!!!




1 comment:

  1. spectacular phrases! :)
    leah and rikki, Henry Whipple

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