Persuasive writing,Henry Whipple

Class 4 have been doing some persuasive writing....
SEA LIFE CENTER
come and spend an amazing day
here spend all day.Save up to
£1.00 on children under 3
years and under.Adults will enjoy
it because there are a lot of things
to do.There is a massive car park
your car will be safe here.

First you get to go and have a look at
the animals.There are lots of things
for friends and family to do and children.
Children are safe and there is a soft play area
for children 3 years to 18 months only.
when you think you have had enough
there is wonderful 4D film on
you don't have to pay its free.

By Leighann,class 4,Henry Whipple